heres my history of supra paper so far

Big Wang Bandit

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History of the supra would include more people behind the designs, such and such, sales figures, options, landmarks, benchmarks.

This is like a sales brochure with lots of tech.

You need to assume the reader knows what DOHC and SOHC stand for. You also abbreviate too much.

You keep saying *.*L. We know what L stands for. But you should state it somewhere in the article beforehand.

The new 7M-GTE had a displacement of 3 liters and was equipped with Toyota's latest engine monitoring system, which replaced a normal cars distributor with a........


Why I just typed that I don't know, But it sounded ok.

Ill go on more, But I need to keep doing my homework :p
 

Zazzn

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need to make it intresting and add some BS in there

I don't know what course it's for but if it's for english.. You'll get a crap mark...

You need to make it intresting... Call it something like why supras are best for street racing why they are the fastest jap sprots cars... why they are the best....

Prove something and make it intresting along the way
 

brs86supra

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just turned in the first half of my paper for the teacher to look over, just waiting to hear what she'll say. probably what most of you had said about my paper and how i should correct certain things. still got to get started on my other half, i got two mor pages to write these next two pages or maybe a little more will be very interesting. thanks a lot for everyones help
 

Zazzn

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Well good luck, put mabye 1% fact and 99% bullshit. teacher won't know the diff and it will sound intresting ;) you want the teacher to say "shit I want a supra" after they read the story...

Now all this comming form someone who didn't learn that until after school... yeah... sucks... teachers dont actually teach you what you really want to know sometimes..