bigaaron said:I like it a lot, but can you write condense that into 10,000 words or less?
I grew a beard half way through reading it! :biglaugh:
I will likely make it smaller. It's redundant in spots, but it's trying to hammer a point home so that even the most dense can get it...
It's a difficult balance to maintain.
I'll probably work on it this weekend. I spend this past weekend out in the woods target shooting with various weapons, so I had no time for SM this past weekend.